Example:
Explanation:
The phrase "teetered on the brink" is a common phrase to describe something is close to happening or almost about to happen. It is most commonly used to modify a collapse or destruction of some kind. It is an overused statement and lacks originality.
Revision:
The Spanish government threatened to dissolve--deeply divided over the status of the prosperous region of Catalonia on Wednesday--stymying the passage of a national budget and almost throwing the country into another round of protracted political uncertainty.
This statement gives the same information without the unoriginal phrase.
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