How words are used in a sentence can vary depending on the context of the sentence. Sometimes the wrong word is used because the Journalist thinks it means something that it doesn't. Sometimes it's a simple misspelling and other times it's the wrong word entirely.
Example: The New York Times April 16th Issue
Explanation:
The word albeit means although. Based on the way it is used in the sentence, albeit is supposed to put emphasis on the fact that 15 minute checkups don't address future issues that can be life-threatening. The "that" after "one" throws the use of albeit off, and it doesn't work here.
Revision:
However, the typical 15-minute office visit is often focused on current medical issues, like diabetes and high blood pressure, rather than on a possible future problem, especially one that can be life- threatening. Or ,one that can become life-threatening.
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