Example:
From The Chicago Tribune March 28, 2019 |
Explanation:
This sentence used the present singular tense of "is." The weak verb pushes the subject, Thomas Kokoraleis toward the end of the sentence. A stronger verb can be used in place of "is" to give the sentance more meaning.Revision:
Where Thomas Kokoraleis plans to live remains unclear. Alternatively: It remains unclear where Thomas Koloraleis plans to live.
The verb "remains" replaced the weaker verb, "is."
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