When the main noun is too far from the verb that goes with it, it can be confused with other nouns in the same sentence. Sentences usually put the verb and the noun as close together as possible for clarity.
Example: The Chiacgo Tribune April 24th Issue
Explanation:
The main noun "city code lawsuits" is quite far from the verb "have". It could be closer, so the reader can get to the action quicker.
Revision:
Nearly five months later, however, city code lawsuits have quadrupled against the Better Housing Foundation.
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