Fifteen examples of editing mistakes from published works of journalism are shown and how to fix them.
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Sunday, April 21, 2019
Parallelism
Parallelism is the grammatical balance of a sentence. It allows for the sentence to flow and have rhythm when read. A sentence that lacks parallelism causes confusion in the focus of the sentence and the rhythm.
The use of the infinitive "to be" in the sentence is paired with complement nouns "sponsor" and supplier. Both words start with s and happen to end in an "--er" sound adding to the balance of the sentence. If supplier was changed to " to supply" it would not be balanced, supplier would be changed to a verb where sponsor is a noun.
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