Example:
From The Chicago Tribune February 22, 2019 |
Explanation:
Pinterest is being modified as a company that has not taken a "hands-off approach to the problem" of users recieving harmful information about vaccines by blocking the results about them entirely. The sentence modifies Pinterest's tactic while talking about companies instead of Pinterest itself.Revision:
While most companies have taken a more hands-off approach to the problem, citing free speech issues, Pinterest takes a radical alternative by banning all vacine-related content, one that makes it tougher for users to find accurate information about vacines even as it seeks to protect them.
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